shruikann's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Rise of a KING]

Good!

I liked it! people keep complaining that it's too slow to get around but so long as i'm killing stuff i'm fine with it.
People also say when two things attack them they get stuck. Hello? why do you think you can jump?
I think this was good but in the future you will be much better.

SeethingSwarm responds:

Thanks. Yeah I'm still quite new at all this, but I've got a few games under my belt and I'm starting to get the hang of things slowly. Hopefully I'll just keep getting better...

[Shooting Game Tutorial]

thanks, but...

everything works except killing the guy... it sais:

**Error** Symbol=Symbol 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 1: Statement must appear within on handler
gotoAndPlay(13);

which is when he dies... so when i click on him he doesn't end up dieing... any help? anyone?

[Stick Stage]

pretty good

i think it wasnt that bad, it kept me entertained for about 10-15 minutes (which is pretty good) I think that if you detail it a little more it would be great, the selection of blood was nice and the blood was very detailed, if you could somehow rotate them that would be great, although i don't know how you would do that, i think the brains were bad, just lose the brains altogether. summed up alltogether it was a nice combination of a dress-up sort of game with stick violence.

I'll give it a fairly average 6, keep it up.

danny220 responds:

lol, i thought brains were what made people like these things, ok next time i shall have no brains (lol, my little joke for the day)

[Turret Defense]

meh

it was ok but too hard, i got a bit bored after a while. but good job, i also found some small spelling and grammar mistakes but thats ok.

[Defend your Random Turret]

pretty good...

i think it was pretty good, i mean you've certainly got some good drawing skills but you need to have things more animated, make them look full of life, and this game was a bit simple, u need to have more variety and it needs to be more original

Graphics- 8, you are good at drawing
Style- 2, you need a more original idea but good try
Sound- 6, pretty good sounds, went well with the game
Violence- 3, not much to say here, i guess they just exploded
Interactivity- 5, you need to make the turret on the gun move as you move the mouse.
Humor- 0, well there wasn't any humor.
Overall- 5, i would give u an 8 or so because of the graphics but you need to make the game more interesting

[The Miles Game]

dude...

i havn't laughed this hard since arfenhouse.. you gotta make more levels!

[lightsaber tut pro]

that was very good

this was fun to do to make lightsabers and stuff I made a mini fight and it looks pretty cool, thx for submittin this, it really helped me out